Feedback

After presenting our pitch, Matt and Mike had some feedback that we could consider adding to (or taking out) our sequence in order to improve it. Here are some of the points they made:

• ''Mix it up'' - Rather than in the woods, it could be in a car park and they're getting out of the van to go in their individual cars and split up. This is to show that they are trying to be low key by getting into cars that aren't associated with the robbery.

• ''One location'' - Rather than having multiple locations, having one will be much more practical. This is because we only have a day to shoot which is only a couple of hours as it's winter. Theres not enough time to film multiple locations without rushing it.

• "She takes both of them out" - Instead of having the second person running away, it could be more effective if he tries to run and she catches him and kills him as it's adding tension.







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